Monday, February 19, 2018


The dumpling smell


One early afternoon i was playing with my bableads until i smelt this delishi smell . The smell was as strong as a piglet ramming into a gate. In my head i was saying dumpling and noodles dumplings and noodles again and again and again.

I had got  so excited that i could not wait any more. Dad said diner is all most ready. I was so excited that my head berst like a slow motion water balloon hitting someone and bursting. Dad new how much i loved dumplings and noodles. As Dad brung out the diner i rushed to the table but… Oh no it's stir fry.

I wa felling so bad that dad had made one hole stir fry and i did not eat it. The stir fry had veggies all over it.

THE END
By oliver stone

1 comment:

  1. I like how you said 'The smell was as strong as a piglet ramming into a gate.'
    maybe work on the spelling.

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